Saturday, April 18, 2009

雨带来的幸福-(创歌)



词:薛远尘
曲:梦萍

雨一滴一滴地打在身上
走在前头的我
转身 看见了
你纯白色的裙子满是圆点
想用那双小小的手
遮挡雨点的袭击

我还是不愿停下脚步
为了那无聊的自尊
外套重得脱不下
却想告诉你
愿当你的避风港
看~着~你~眼~睛~

chorus
#雨不停落下
共撑雨伞的画面又在浮现
埋怨的脸下
藏着幸福的笑脸
雨不停落下
还记得你说你喜欢雨的宁静
喜欢那香味 土地的芬芳
喜欢雨滴带来的希望
幸福的感觉
只希望雨持续地落下#

到了雨停的那一刻
你的心是否还在我身旁
告诉我雨是幸福的象征
告诉我雨是因承受不了思念而落下来

#repeat chorus#

雨停的那一刻
就该换另一方幸福了

this songs just draft only

7 comments:

远尘 said...

nice!
good lar.. can ady..
but.. can you send this video to me? coz i want to post at my blog also..

远尘 said...

erm.. forget to say liao..
i think.. still need to add some part..

SteLLa mUsiC said...

lolx...cant send le......
coz when i send it cant read through email so i put here lor...~~~

Eugene/Egue said...

>>stella
yoo...good job...nice melody n lyric too..gambateh..

远尘 said...

oo.. then when i on.. u send to me lo.. through MSN..

wenwei said...

bravo ...i cn only say it's really good , coz i cn never done such a gd song , i m nt a musician , for me , i dont know whether ths song is consider gd or wat ..bt for me , it's really amazing !!!

Smokey Deek said...

who's going to sing? my advice is...sing out the song wif lyrics..as there's difference between a song wif vocal n an instrumental song..it may sound nice in instrumentally but mayb not when u add in vocal..anyway..it's quite a nice piece of composition..when u guys are going to record it? can count me in? =)